What are your thought/opinions on this poem and this little writing snippet?

its great! but don't get insulted or anything below Poem: part i guess to label this line 2 and 3, i'd replace line 3 =/ to something like "Things felt good, just tonight" to get rid of the repetition. I didn't write it so I got no permission to say anythin like that i'm not a teacher haha but it's good